Tuesday, July 14, 2026

i fell in to a burning ring of fire

wouldn't it be more
appropriate
to say, i rose in love,
instead of
i fell in love.
falling in love, gives
the impression
that maybe you might
have tripped and stumbled
into it,
clumsily,
not necessarily what you
intended to do.
rising though, seems like
the better word.
rising like a cloud or
a rainbow,
or the moon, or a sun
above the ocean.
maybe a bird of some sort
soaring above
the trees.
something mushy and hallmark
like that,
but i get the term i've
fallen
out of love
with you.
it still rings in my ear
from time to time.

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