write something serious,
something
like
what Robert Frost might write,
how dark
and quiet the snow
is,
how deep,
how far away you are from
home,
with miles
to go before you sleep,
tell me
how a good fence
makes
a good neighbor, tell me
about the road
not taken, and
how it's made all the difference
in your life.
stop writing such silly things
like you do,
show me,
show me that you have
a lick of
talent.
go further and show me
what's really
in you.
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