Tuesday, October 27, 2020

one critic

your poems are nonsensical
at times
she writes.
some are positive
some not.
some are dark and full of
worry
and fear
a world gone  wrong.
love gone
astray.
childhood and old age.
you wanted me to say
what i thought, but i'm
sorry i can't find the words
to say anything nice.
but you asked.
i was hoping for something
more along
the hallmark card
type of poetry.
but nice try. keep at it.
you never know.

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