word up

why are you
writing so many
words. i can't
follow this.
my eyes are blurry
and my head hurts.
what are you talking
about. keep it
simple. keep it
short. tighten
up and get to
the point. this
so called poetry
of yours is really
starting to stink.
i want the old stuff.
old school. dr.
seuss for example.