I like this poem. Don't really understand the justification of "in" on a line by itself. Your line breaks confound me sometimes. Just saying. I think the rhythm would be nicer to just have "in the sweet black night." All on one line.
these are all FICTIONAL stories and characters and are in no way representative of any real
experiences in my or anyone else's life. any similarities are purely coincidental, except for the dog poems.
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I like this poem. Don't really understand the justification of "in" on a line by itself. Your line breaks confound me sometimes. Just saying. I think the rhythm would be nicer to just have
"in the sweet black night."
All on one line.
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