I like this poem. Don't really understand the justification of "in" on a line by itself. Your line breaks confound me sometimes. Just saying. I think the rhythm would be nicer to just have"in the sweet black night."All on one line.
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I like this poem. Don't really understand the justification of "in" on a line by itself. Your line breaks confound me sometimes. Just saying. I think the rhythm would be nicer to just have
"in the sweet black night."
All on one line.
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