the rewrite

the movie of you,
starring you in
the lead role
has hit a slow
part in the plot.
you seem to be stuck
in an entire reel
of filler, loops of boring
dialogue, players
acting badly
in bit parts. it
seems to be going
nowhere. you want to yell
out, cut. stop, bring me
the script,
we need to rewrite
nearly all of this.