pour me one more
cup before i go.
i'm going to alaska.
i'm in love with
no one, and want
nothing but a white
endless range of
blowing snow. i want
to feel the cold
on my face as i
stand beneath the
brilliant blue sky.
i want to know
once more what it
feels to be alive.
pour me one more
cup before i go.
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About Me
- Stephen Chute
- west springfield, virginia, United States
- these are all FICTIONAL stories and characters and are in no way representative of any real experiences in my or anyone else's life. any similarities are purely coincidental, except for the dog poems.
1 comment:
I like this one. One change the writer might consider -- take out the first and last lines. Makes it cleaner and to the point. I mean unless you are trying to say something to your readers with "pour me one more cup before I go." I took that to mean that the writer really doesn't want to go to Alaska and is trying to convince himself that he does. Was I right? Either way, I like it without the "pour me one more cup before I go."
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