Friday, July 23, 2010

the note

i found this purse
in the alley on my
way home from work.
i took my usual short
cut between buildings,
getting off the bus,
off the subway.
the alley is always
dark and dangerous,
but in the summer there
is enough light to
feel safe if you hurry.
the purse was white
and shiny, almost
like a seashell on the
beach, lying by itself
on the pavement, it
had little pearls
embedded in the strap.
it looked just like
the purse you have.
the one you carry
everywhere. everywhere.
i picked it up and
opened it. there was
a piece of paper
inside, just that,
a note. no money,
no jewelry, no credit
cards, or id of any
sort. no hairbrush, or
make up. no mints.
no gum or perfume.
i opened the note
and read it. it said.
i'm sorry, but i
can't do this anymore.
the message wasn't
subtle at all, but
where you placed
it was. i thank
you for that. very
very clever sweet girl.

2 comments:

lgsbowen said...

Wow. I could read this one again and again. The description of the alley -- the premonition that something was going to happen. Then the bright and shiny purse, like a seashell. The contrast. That's gooooood Mr. Chute. You see, this is why I do think you are a genius and even if your blog is not reaching the masses today, your poetry is going to be published and wildly popular and referenced in literary courses someday.

lgsbowen said...

This is a wonderful poem. I like the foreshadowing with the dark scary alley. And the stark contrast, with the shiney white purse like a seashell on a beach. Very well done.