Monday, October 21, 2013

the orbit

the orbit
of me
is getting
closer
as the gravity
of you
pulls me in.
i'm not sure
if it will
be a soft
landing
or a firey
one, but
just the same
i'm falling
towards you
in a dizzy
spin.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well this one deserves some kind of comment. How about I like it, i really like it!

Anonymous said...

I love the idea of making you dizzy.