Wednesday, January 6, 2010

flood rising

the sadness
of love
is that it can
end so quickly,
the differences
running over,
like water
from a storm,
flooding
the streets,
bringing
the debris
to the surface,
to float
aimlessly
on the current,
as you go
under,
and under
gasping for air.

1 comment:

lgsbowen said...

Mr. Chute,
This poem is in such contrast to the one entitled "January." Does true love really end so quickly? Perhaps two people abruptly part ways, quickly ending a romance. But doesn't love remain somewhere within us? Well,perhaps it is different for each person lucky enough to really be in love. Anyway, "Flood Rising" is a beautifully written poem, but I prefer the story "January" tells.
LGSB